Hanging by a Thread
We are a fragile people on the verge of sopor
5/8/2009 06:07:17 pm
I'll be honest with you. You can write ideas, but you have no knack for poetry.
7/8/2010 08:51:39 am
I completely disagree with reader that you do not have a knack for poetry and agree that you can write ideas. I thought your word choice was absolutely prodigious. Your ideas were heart-renching and that combined with you amazing word choice almost brought tears to my eyes! Also, your metaphors were marvelous. "Time is a fatal friend" and "...lost in a forest of my own invention, were remarkable and genius. The rhyming was very enjoyable, by the way. In other words, your poetry is some of the best I have ever read and I LOVED it! Can't wait for more additions! Great job!
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